Tuesday, August 15, 2017

WIP - "Evermore" Part -

In the past few weeks, I've done - well nothing on the projects I should be doing. Surprisingly I've been rather busy. However - there is still room for improvement. While I have yet to tackle any sort of re-write for any of my current projects, or re-draw for that matter, I will leave you with a little expert of a story I've posted about before, and am still working with on draft number one. (How's that for a sentence!)

A little background for this story: Yes, it came about after I saw the remake, er, "live-action", of Disney's "Beauty and the Beast". Yes the song was stuck in my head. Yes it inspired it. And this is sorta the middle part of the story.....yeah. It's titled the way it is because I'm not overly concerned with an actual title for this piece as of yet. So, without further ado -

"Evermore"
(Part ???)

“My apologies, I didn’t mean to frighten you.”

He stood in the doorway, unwilling to enter the small room with her.

“No, it’s alright,” she straightened the chair. “No harm done.”

She stood near the old desk. The last time he’d been down here was when the brothers had stumbled upon his castle. They’d decided to keep these rooms after learning of the curse. To better fit the atmosphere, was what they’d called it. As he thought about it, all of the others who’d come through had used this room. None had wanted to stay in the upper floors, or have any window near to them. As though the panes to the outside world held some fright.

“You’re curse – there’s little time left to break it, isn’t there?”

Her voice drew him from the past. The question was not one he’d been expecting. There was still much he wanted to discuss with her; none of which involved the topic of his curse.

“How did you –”

The grin she gave him was subtle, but in the candlelight it illuminated the mischief in her eyes.

“These papers here, they were written by others who’ve come to the castle. Others who tried to break the curse,” she picked up the papers, “Can you tell me anything else about it?”

He stared at her, then at the papers in her arms.

“Come, lunch is served.”

He felt guilt for not answering her directly. Being down there so close to the darkness was overwhelming. It was not the place to talk about already dark matters. They were too close to the hidden room where the curse had festered and languished for the past century. There was power in words – power given freely. If spoken too close to the source it would add to that malevolent power. He wouldn’t risk it.

Barely glancing over his should to ensure she was following him back up to the dining room, he could see the slight droop of her shoulders. She’d hoped he would answer. He could see it in her – she wanted to know more.

A thirst for knowledge to understand what cannot be explained, the thought made him smile. No one before her had had that.

* * * * * * * *

Catherine followed him back up the winding stairs. He’d changed the subject when she’d asked about the curse. She tried to understand. There was so much more to this new world she was in. So much that she needed to understand. She needed the truth about this strange place; about why it had seemed to draw her back each time she left. She finally realized the day she’d found her father – he had been right outside the gates leading into the vast gardens. He’d been here before; that was how he’d remembered the castle to make the cast for the music box. He knew about this place. She’d been so close then.

“Mademoiselle.”

Coming out of her memory she looked up. They were back in the lavish (if outdated) dining room. She looked around for the person who’d spoken to her, but found no one. The monster-man-
Tarnish it, she thought, I’ll just call him…Adrian.

The name didn’t fit him, but she couldn’t think of a better one for him. It was frustrating. She would go on a hunt here in the castle to find something that had his name on it. There had to be a diary of someone, or papers, letters, anything to let her know what he might once have been called.

Taking a seat across from him, she set the papers on the chair next to her.

A meal as she’d never seen before was spread out: fresh bread, hot soup, fruits and a few things she didn’t recognize. It was one of the best meals she’d ever had.

Adrian cleared his throat. When she looked up at him he diverted his gaze to the side.

“I wanted to apologize,” he paused. “Again.”

Curious to what he could be apologetic for she waited. The silence continued to stretch while he sat there. She realized he hadn’t eaten a thing.

“Aren’t you hungry?”

He looked right at her and shook his head. The expression in his eyes startled her. Setting down the roll in her hand she glanced down at the food before her. Would he –

“I can help break this curse. The papers I found down in that room – from the others who’ve come before – they have hints to how it can be done.” She caught his eye, “I know I can break it. There’s still a few weeks left before the new year, you have to let me try.”

The room became hazy. Mild panic reached into her.


“Don’t let her win! If I am the last one to try, bring me back,” her voice lowered to a whisper. She saw him coming around to her, “Don’t let her win….there’s still a way to break….”



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